Persuasive Paragraph

Electronics should be aloud at schools. Some students do better at their homework with electronics. I learned about a school that actually gives their students I pods and found that those students do better at school. There was a study done that proved that students do better on tests when they are aloud to have their electronics. When a student is aloud to have their electronics, they get into less trouble in class. The students get in more trouble when they try to sneak their electronics than those who are aloud to have them.