Persuasive Paragraph

Some Electronics serve a purpose in schools, while others do not. Ipods serve a great person, because while left to do busy work, they are more inclined to do it because they have something to listen to, to entertain them while they do their homework. There was a study done a few years ago, where they had students take the same test, some with music, some without. The students listening to music did better on the test than the ones without music. Cell Phones on the other hand have no place, or purpose in schools. cells phones are nothing but a distraction, destructively so. when your worried about what's going on with everyone else, you cant worry about what your doing then and there, losing your focus. When you text during a text, you become distracted, and end up with a lower score in most cases. So there should be banes on some electronics, while others should be allowed.