“Of course I will, I’m so excited to see your house.” My adoptive parents and me were talking about the house they lived in, and they were asking if I wanted to be there son. I didn’t have a family, so of course I said yes. I was so excited. Have you ever felt “needed” or “wanted” by any body? Well I did the day my adoptive parents first told me they were going to adopt me.
Tom
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I think it's good that you started in the middle of a conversation because it gets the reader wondering what the rest of it was about. I think you could have let it hang a little more rather than explaining it so you have a good hook for the reader.
Tom, I'm glad that you've got a family and you feel needed or wanted. That's awesome that you got your chance for something like that. I hope everything works out for you
I think that that's an excellent intro I especially liked the feeling you put into it, keep it up, man!
I'm so glad that you feel needed and wanted. i never had that so you are pretty lucky
That's great that you have a family now! I was adopted too. I hope it works out for you.
that is cool that you got to live with them. and that good you got to talk to them about it and that is cool that they adopted you
Billy
you made me feel that i was there. that i was the one feeling wanted. you did a great job i want to know more. you are a great writer
you made me feel that i was there. that i was the one feeling wanted. you did a great job i want to know more. you are a great writer
Hey man I think this opening paragraph is really great. I can relate to you in a way. I was adopted when I was only 11 days old. SO I can't say I have experienced the same feelings as you have, but I know I'm really glad my parents adopted me.
I've had an experience like this, when I was first put into foster care. only mine didn't turn out good. hopefully yours did.
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