Is violence ever ok? I would have to say yes at times it is ok to fight. Should we always fight? No I mean people are always trying to “prove how tough they are” or how cool they are and it’s stupid. We are constantly trying to hurt one another over ridiculous things. I can understand those people who just have anger problems ,but if your like that, then get it taken care of because no one wants to be around that. I think that it is ok to fight if someone is hurting you or if someone you care about is getting hurt. That doesn’t mean you should just like kill the person though. There is self defense then there is just over the top beating the crap out of someone and that’s only ok in rare occasions. Everyone is just so caught up on being “tougher, bigger, better.” When in reality you look ridiculous always trying to fight people. So yes you will win a few fights and there may be some a little scared or think your cool for a little bit but then what? Exactly nothing. So only fight to defend your self or someone you love, and don’t like murder them just defend yourself.
-Kesha
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This is a really good paper. I agree with your point. I also think that people look bad fighting also. I hate fighting and violence. But yes there are times where it is okay.
i agree in what you say. i use to fight for fear so i can be top. but it is dumb. its better to fight like you said to deffened or help a family member
brayan L.
i agree with you. sometimes there is a time to fight and sometimes you can deal with it in different ways. i dont always do that though. im the kind of person that would rather fight than talk about it.
your good person and thanks for talking to me it helped a little.
I agree, I've gotten in a lot of fights because of people making fun of me, maybe that's why I'm mean, but i never did it to look tougher... just to defend my self. LOVE U DUDE :D
Exactly, it gets to the point where fighting isn't even fighting anymore it's just for show. I have asked people why they fought and the usual first answer is anger. Eventually they dig deeper and they realize that it was really over nothing.
yeah i agree but it ain't the answer no matter but any ways you did a great job
i think most of that is rite but i hate fighting. but i do think its ok to defend your self
Yeah thats true its stupid just how people like starting drama. well you had great grammar and punctuation's
Your paragraph on violence explained many circumstances in which violence is permissible and also when it is not. I like how you integrated questions in your writing for the reader to think about. This adds more depth to the piece because the audience can add in their own experiences to your thoughts. To make this stronger I think you could elaborate on situations where fighting is not the right action to take. If you give more detail, the reader will better understand your position. Also, your ending was very strong and you clearly stated what you want the reader to take away from this piece of writing.
i agree with you in all aspects of your thoughts about violence.
Kesha, I definately agree with this. If you need to defend yourself, then do whatever it is that can help protect youself.
I also agree that if people have anger problems, which people do, then they should have the opportunity to get if fixed.
Kesha, amazing. I totally agree with what you said, fighting is stupid. And people fight over the most stupid stuff. I think fighting is okay when it comes to you defending your self or your family. I will always fight for my family and protect them no matter what.
good job girl.
I would say that is okay to fight to an extent. I believe what you say is true even though I've never been in a fight,well physically. That extent is when ur standing up for your self and i think that would be you.
i totally agree people look bad when they are trying to be"bad." I think fighting is okay, but it may be nessisary.
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