Do you like to buy new shoes every month? Because I know I don’t. payless shoes are not worth your money. Don’t waste the money you could be using for other things that are worth it.
Payless does not have good quality shoes. Their shoes are not comfortable. They are made of artificial leather. Payless shoes wear out awfully fast. They don’t usually have the right size.
Payless is quite inconvenient. They have no shoe salesman to fit your shoes. Their shoes don’t fit right. Also, they don’t have good service.
Payless does not have a lot of variety either. A lot of their shoes look the same. They are not up to date with social fashion. They have no name brands too.
So when you need new shoes, think twice. Is payless worth your money? Buy shoes that will be durable and long lasting, cute and up to date. Go to places where you get your moneys worth.
Shawnie
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I did my persuasive on the same topic. My opinion was different but i think that you are of the more knowledgeable sort.
Mike F.
1. payless shoes suck
2..wear out more money crapy survice
3...it was good i dont like shoes from there.
Last time I went to Payless shoe store. Next month I was back again buying a new pair of shoes. I agree with your paper they are a piece of crap!
yes i do love new shoes every month
no but this is a really good paper i really like the first part about buying shoes ever month that really got me hooket
billy
you made a good point and its believable i believe it
payless shoe got no grip you will fall and bust your lip thats what i say
Brayan L.
From what I'm reading, your 3 main points are: first, Payless doesn't have good quality of shoes. Second, Payless is inconvenient. And third, Payless doesn't have a good selection of shoes. I don't look at shoes very much, but I'm willing to believe your point about Payless.
I like what you had to say about payless shoes. This is because i can relate to what you said, and i agree that they are not worth the money. I really liked how in your last paragraph you presented a question, and answered it in a persuasive way.
Shawnie,
I share in your frustrations with the shoe company payless. I really liked the details and points you have to back up why spending money for shoes, especially at payless is a waste. May I suggest that you say something about how payless is the reason you don't like spending money for shoes in your intro. This is because your entire piece is over payless shoes and not... Nike, foot locker, or any other types of shoes. This organization would help your piece flow better.
Your so funny, I like how you wrote this, but I agree with a lot of what you said like not up to date with the fashion.
i agree with all that is true you should save your money that you get every month for some thing important some thing that you need insteat of some thing that will get old. bonni
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