Friday, October 9, 2009

Persuasive: Final Draft

Did you just notice you’re out of eggs or that one of your kids need a poster board for science tomorrow? It’s a little past midnight and you just want to run to one store and hurry home to your bed. Wal-Mart has it all! Wal-Mart has great conveniences, contains large varieties, and is an easy store to become familiar with. Now let me explain to you why I would choose Wal-Mart over Target.

My first reason for this belief is that Wal-Mart is very convenient. It’s open 24/7, which is convenient when you get the munchies and need to run to the store at 2 in the morning. Having either a McDonald’s or Subway inside the store is convenient as well. We all know how it feels when shopping just exhausts us!

My second reason for this belief is that Wal-Mart has large varieties. There’s a grocery department, which of course contains food; steak, chicken, hamburger, potatoes, vegetables, fruit, chips, cookies, etc. they also have a clothing and shoe department for all ages and stereo- types. For the men there’s the mechanic and electronics department carrying tools, TV’s, computers, and the greasy stuff.

My third and final reason for this belief is that Wal-Mart is an easy store to become familiar with. The setup is usually the same in every store throughout Utah. Wal-Mart is nation wide with great locations. If you’re out on vacation or on a trip, Wal-Mart is always there to just make a quick stop.

So now that I’ve explained to you that Wal-Mart is convenient, has large variety, and is easy to become familiar with; you should now have the want and urge to shop at Wal-Mart for anything and everything at anytime.

Maryssa

4 comments:

Shawnie said...

you have good structure. you had your thoughts together. good job. i understood that wal mart is convenient, has variety and is an easy store to shop in. it is true you become familiar with wal mart and know what it contains. it has a lot of things to shop for. and is easy to shop in.

edgardo said...

Thats true Walmart is pretty big and has mostly every thing you need. Yeah when i need to go buy food with my proctors we usually go to Walmart. Great punctuation's on ur essay to and grammar. I think u should get and for this.

Jordan said...

That is cool that you know that much about Wal-Mart.
That was a good paper.

Anonymous said...

wall mare is so much better than super target . your a brillant girl with a bright future.